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Thanks for this submission.  As of the February 15 GFSG conference call, this document has been voted on and approved for moving forward.  Once the 
authors respond to the items below (or decide to put them off until after the public comment period), we will put this into 60-day public comment.

These are some relatively minor formatting issues.  They could be addressed before or after the public comment period, but to address them before will
 be one fewer simple item for people to comment on.

1. The copyright date should be 2005 at the top & bottom copyright sections
2. The Table of Contents should be at the top
3. The running header needs to have a 1" margin.  Now, it's far less
4. You need to submit a .doc or other editable version to the document pipeline
5. See my advice for Security Considerations in the Editor project page.  Yours is not sufficient: you should address or point to security 
considerations for GridRPC.
6. Your references #15 and #20 are not to documents, so should not be in the references section.  These should be cited in-line.

Overall, the level of detail in the technical content seems to be appropriate for a draft recommendation.  I would not mind seeing an example (in 
addition to Figure 1) that shows what an RPC communication instance might look like, but I understand that the desire might be to just focus on the 
recommendation detail.

That would be February 15 for the deadline for the GFSG review.  Sorry for my repeated mis-typing!

Sorry - my last tracker entry was a mistake.  Per the Jan 25 conference call, this document is now in GFSG review until January 15.

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