Responses in line:

Comments from the OGSA Data WG
Page 8, Table: The list of data capabilities here does not reflect  
the OGSA architecture.  I suggest that it be replaced
 with:

Data description
Data access
Data transfer
Data storage
Data replication
Data federation
Data caching
Data security
Data provisioning
Session management
Distributed transactions

This list includes areas that are currently addressed by the OGSA  
Data Architecture and additional areas that are
relevant.  Data provisioning has been addressed by the EGA  
Reference Model.

To update the list to the current OGSA Data thinking is an excellent  
idea, but this change is more substantial than a simple edit, so I  
would prefer to action this change in the next document version.

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The use case table should list provenance tracking as a capability.  This  
could be added to the data section or possibly another

I would push it to the next version.

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I suggest that you add other sections called "Data Access" and  
"Storage". You might possibly others called "Data
Replication" and "Data Federation".

These are certainly areas for inclusion, but this document is not  
aiming at the whole space, but rather an attempt hit high priorities.  
In the next version we may become broader, but this depends of the  
requirement gathering process in OGF. No changes are planed in this  
version.