12/08/2005 4:32 AM
post4796
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several comments
I have reviewed the WS-Agreement specification and have some comments and questions to be clarified.
1. On page 6-7, table of external specifications,
I can not find specific version numbers in the Spec Version Column.
Please provide them in the "Spec Version Column".
2. On page 10, table of prefix and namespace.
I suggest replacing the below URLs with those of the standard bodies.
wsbf http://www.ibm.com/xmlns/stdwip/web-services/WS-BaseFaults
wssg http://www.ibm.com/xmlns/stdwip/web-services/WS-ServiceGroup
wsrp http://www.ibm.com/xmlns/stdwip/web-services/WSResourceProperties
3. On page 26, section 4.2.6.2, third sentence.
I don't understand what part of the referenced document [XQUERYX]
is relevant in terms of "a generic assertion language".
Please elaborate more to clarify this.
4. On page 49-50, 13 References.
I believe the URIs for standard bodies should be used for WS-*
specifications, rather than the private comanies one,
even if they contain the equivalent contents.
5. On page 50, [XQUERYX].
The status of the draft is wrong.
Please replace the W3C Working Draft with the W3C Candidate
Recommendation.
Also, I believe the URIs for standard bodies should be used here.
6. On page 50, [JSDL]
I suggest updating this reference with the officially published version.
Also it should be referenced in Appendix 2.
7. On page 50, [XML-ns] [ComputeJobs]
I suggest removing these reference since they are not referenced
in fact in the other places.
I appreciate your effort to answer my comments and questions.
Best Regards,
Naoya Fujisaki
Fujitsu Laboratories Ltd.
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