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Editorial comments
Ellen,

My only comments are minor:

- Line 86 seems to be missing a word, or maybe has
  too many words.  You might want to take a look:

    The state of whether the execution environment
    is accepting new activities is captured the use of
                                                          ^^^^^^^

- Line 115 "in support of a execution environment"
                                   ^
                                  an

Great job.  Very helpful.

Tom
Re: Editorial comments
at line 86, you're right...words are missing; it should say 'captured through the use of'

at line 115, again you're right; I changed 'a' to 'an'

updates will be reflected in version 11.

 
 


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