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Greg Newby: 03/30/2010 4:44 PM EDT
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Move
Moved from Submit OGF Draft to Published
Group changed from Infrastructure to none (no value)
resolution set to Accepted
Status changed from Ready to Publish to Closed
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Greg Newby: 03/30/2010 4:44 PM EDT
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Update
Assigned To changed from Richard Hughes-Jones to none (no value)
Priority changed from 2 to 1
Status changed from Author Action Needed to Ready to Publish
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Joel Replogle: 01/14/2010 3:51 PM EST
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Published as GFD.162 on 2010-01-14.
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Thijs Metsch: 01/14/2010 8:26 AM EST
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Updated the document. PDF is attached. Document number included. Most references are now footnotes...
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occi-usecases.pdf
(71.06 KB)
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Added an attachment.
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Greg Newby: 12/10/2009 6:36 PM EST
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This will be GFD-I.162.
Please also send email when you upload the final document. For some reason, I'm not getting all the GF notifications. newby AT arsc.edu
Thanks!
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Thijs Metsch: 12/09/2009 3:32 AM EST
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I'm currently finishing up the document. Can you provide me with a document number?
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Greg Newby: 11/11/2009 3:13 PM EST
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Authors/editors: public comment is complete. Please view and respond as needed to the public comments.
If needed, you can make changes in response to public comments in order to prepare a final version of the document. Please upload the final version
to this tracker, when ready for final pre-publication review.
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Update
Assigned To changed from Joel Replogle to Richard Hughes-Jones
Priority changed from 3 to 2
Status changed from Public Comment Period to Author Action Needed
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Joel Replogle: 09/30/2009 11:57 PM EDT
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Entered public comment 2009-09-30
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Thijs Metsch: 09/29/2009 8:27 AM EDT
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Hi,
Some comment :-)
1. Submit an editable version
The sources can be found at code.google.com/p/occi It is a docbook format so in XML - I didn't wanted to submit all xml files.
2. Move the abstract before the TOC (see our samples for this, or the GFD #152.
I tried to do that but Docbook does not allow to do that. Would this be a major issue?
3. None of your references are references, except maybe the first. They should all be inline citations or footnotes, not references. Again, see #152
for guidance on this.
Comment taken. I will change that in a future update.
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Greg Newby: 09/18/2009 11:00 AM EDT
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Thanks. This is ready for public comment. Three thigns for you to do:
1. Submit an editable version
2. Move the abstract before the TOC (see our samples for this, or the GFD #152.
3. None of your references are references, except maybe the first. They should all be inline citations or footnotes, not references. Again, see #152
for guidance on this.
We don't need to wait for these changes to go ahead with public comment. Please do solicit your constituents to provide comments - they're important,
and particularly useful for assessing the completeness & clarity of use cases.
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Update
Assigned To changed from Greg Newby to Joel Replogle
Priority changed from 2 to 3
resolution changed from Accepted to none (no value)
Status changed from AD Review to Public Comment Period
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