SourceForge : artf6139: Wording Issues

Project: rm-wg Trackers > Reference Model Trackers > View Artifact

Artifact artf6139 : Wording Issues

Tracker:	Reference Model Trackers
Title:	Wording Issues
Description:	1) We use “instantiated” in the text. This should be “activated” or commissioned? 2) How do we keep the concept of “Enterprise Grid”, but with a wider context? Can we expand this notion to cover collaboration grids? 3) Need to add more non-normative discussion around the nature of commissioned. 4) Reorganize the outlining levels of the document.
Submitted By:	David Snelling
Submitted On:	03/06/2008 11:43 AM EST
Last Modified:	03/06/2008 11:49 AM EST

(2 Items)
Field	Old Value	New Value	Date	Performed By
Filter:
Title	Use of "Instantiated"	Wording Issues	03/06/2008 11:49 AM EST	David Snelling
Description	We use “instantiated” in the text. This should be “activated” or commissioned?	1) We use “instantiated” in the text. This should be “activated” or commissioned? 2) How do we keep the concept of “Enterprise Grid”, but with a wider context? Can we expand this notion to cover collaboration grids? 3) Need to add more non-normative discussion around the nature of commissioned. 4) Reorganize the outlining levels of the document.	03/06/2008 11:49 AM EST	David Snelling
Remove Filter Apply Filter