These v1.0 public review comments are for consideration in the post-v1 draft of the roadmap.

From Satoshi Itoh:

I have read the OGSA roadmap document. It is very informational document. The roadmaps of OGSA-related activities have 
been summarized. 
 
However, this document describes only planned activities. 
OGSA-WG has already determined a big picture for common services.  I would like to know the roadmap of these common 
services, if possible. Of course it is very difficult. But I think many future adopters wants to know the rough schedule
. 
 
Thanks, 
 
Satoshi Itoh 

And Toshiyuki Nakata said:

I read through the document. Like Satoshi, I found the document informative wrt. the Growing OGSA world. My concern 
similar to Satohi's is that if it is possible, we would like to see how the various activities relate to and whether  
they cover all the space of the Grid/Web-services profile. 
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