Published as GFD-I.169 on 2010-04-19.

This looks read to me, and will now be published as GFD-I.168.  Thanks to the authors/editors for their efforts on this document!

One minor point, Yoshio, I know Matt's email address has changed to matt.viljoen -at- stfc.ac.uk.

Looking at Greg's comments and the document, I wonder if it would be worth highlighting the L2 and L3 headings, they currently look the same as 
ordinary text. Would it be useful to highlight them to make it clear L1>L2>L3.

There are some formatting problems with this document that I cannot fix, because the hierarchy of sections is not clear.

Required changes:
1. add a table of contents
2. update the IP and Copyright sections using the current template (I think yours are older)

For (1), you can use MS Word's section headings (Heading 1, Heading 2, etc.) to existing sections, then have it generate a table of contents.

The paragraph formatting is also uneven..some indentations, some not.

The content seemed OK, but in order to fit well with the document series, and have a professional appearance, the formatting also matters.

Thanks for working on this.  We'll get it published, once the final version arrives.

Jens, we need the document.  Please add the editable version to this tracker, or you could email it to me.  It sounds like there are changes from the 
last file uploaded to this tracker.

Thanks!

This document was discussed by the steering council at OGF27.  The AD (Jensen) will follow up with the group to assess status.

This is now headed for 30-day public comment.  Authors/editors: please solicit people to make public comments, especially from your WG.

Yes, I'm sure that it is ready for public comment.  Please send it for 30-days public comment.  Thanks.

Hi David,

Thanks for the editorial changes and suggestions about the category of this document.  I agree that Informational is better fit to this guideline 
rather than Community Practices.  Please set the status to Editor:Initial.

Thanks for the prompt response.