A new artifact was created for the revised document, so I am closing this tracker.  gbn.

A detailed note with some suggestions was sent via email
on March 10.

Thanks for this submission,and sorry for my delay
in responding.  This document is well-organized, and
I did not see major changes to recommend.

A minor change is that your ICANN reference is not
a reference (references only refer to static documents,
so that later readers can find what you used to
write your recommendation).  This should instead be
an in-text URL, rather than in the References section.

I'm putting this document into initial 15-day GFSG review.
Due to holidays, it might take an extra week or two for
their response.  Afterwards, it should be ready for 60-day 
public comment period.

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