1.2 Non-Goals (page 4)
We will consider these important topics for consideration in future revisions:

Should be:

We will consider these important topics in future revisions:

3. Architecture (page 5)

The sole purpose of this specification is to control and co-ordinate the transfer of bytes from a source (an emitter of 
an ordered byte sequence) and a sink (a receiver of an ordered byte sequence) that is independent of the protocol being 
used to undertake the data transfer.

Should be:

The sole purpose of this specification is to control and co-ordinate the transfer of bytes from a source (an emitter of 
an ordered byte sequence) to a sink (a receiver of an ordered byte sequence) that is independent of the protocol being 
used to undertake the data transfer.

3.2.5 Data Transfer Instance Port Type (page 8)
	
The DTI configuration allows this state to exist past the last transferred byte until the user has confirmed that it no 
longer needs access to this state as the data transfer is complete.

Should be:

The DTI configuration allows this state to exist past the last transferred byte until the user has confirmed that they 
no longer need access to this state as the data transfer is complete.

3.3 Using the DEPRs (page 8)

In the following scenarios ‘data’ encompass structured data and data with no particular structure contained within a 
file.

Should be:
In the following scenarios ‘data’ encompasses structured data and data with no particular structure contained within a
 file.

4. Data Transfer Factory Port Type (page 10)

It seems more logical to rename the “GetDataTransferInstance” operation to “CreateDataTransferInstance”.

4. Data Transfer Factory Port Type (page 10) , just bellow Figure 2:

The details of the DTF are described in below.

Should be:
The details of the DTF are described below.