Apologies for the criticism, but this informational document is barely informational.

Let's see. The document informs that there was a workshop, giving a URL to the materials and notes. Then the agenda and 
presentations follow (but, differently from what section 1 says, "detailed notes taken from the discussions" are not 
there).

So, the main contents of the document are PowerPoint slides, which (as usual) can't be understood without additional 
text. Take, as a random example, the figure on the top of page 8. What is this figure trying to say? What does "Don't 
sweat the small stuff" mean? (Non-English language native speakers, which probably make the majority of GGF members, 
can't be expected to understand this). 

Consequently, the knowledge exchanged on the workshop (which is what the reader is expecting to get from this document) 
are just not there. One can't understand what the "synergies and opportunities" between P2P and Grids are by reading the
 document as it is.

This document should be centered on the "detailed notes taken from the discussions", written with a more summarized and 
a less terse (and easier-to-read) style. with a few figures from the PowerPoint slides when needed.