1.  Line 495:  by the time the model guidelines doc is published, the execution
environment / bes model doc you reference here will have been published.  So please
update the reference to point to the public document page of released documents.
You can even get Greg Newby / Joel Replogle to reserve a GFD number for the 
execution environment/bes model doc if you want to use it in this reference.
1.  On line 569, you say CIM is released 3 or 4 times per year....to be absolutely 
correct, please change that to say 'CIM is released 3 times a year.' 
2.  At the end of Appendix A, you give examples of what OGF has included in CIM.  
Since the BES execution environment / service work has been approved by the TC for 
inclusion in CIMv2.16, please add that item to your list.  Keep in mind that 
CIMv2.16 will be released in late August and it will be later in September before 
your model guidelines doc will be published. Please add one more bullet to the list
after line 599 to say "BES contributed its service definition to DMTF and is present 
in CIM 2.16."