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Thilo Kielmann

10/24/2005 9:42 AM

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misleading title, presentation of section 2

(Also this document lists me as a contributor. As my contributions were in the early phases, I still dare commenting on 
the document.)

Basically, I think the presented architecture is fine. It is just the presenatation in the document that could be 
improved a bit.

For one, I think the title is misleading. (the "API" part). This document does not present an API; this will be done in 
a future document. Just skip this from the title and the abstract and you should be fine.

Second, I think Section 2 needs a revision. Currently, it shows the architecture diagram, but does not present a concise
 description of all the actions etc.
I know, there IS a description, but it merely reads as "anecdotal" rather than being concise and complete. I just pledge
 for a better presentation that allows the reader to understand what the individual boxes are supposed to do. Currently,
 I am missing the overview of this.


Minor things:
title page: get my affiliation right ;-)
2.1.2, sentence before the bullets "GridCPR will require..."
should this be "jab management" rather than "grid authentication"?
2.3.3, second (black) bullet: "terminated events" should be "terminated jobs"???

Andre Merzky

03/15/2007 10:05 AM

post5774

Re: misleading title, presentation of section 2

> (Also this document lists me as a contributor. As my contributions were in the
>  early phases, I still dare commenting on the document.)
> 
> Basically, I think the presented architecture is fine. It is just the 
> presenatation in the document that could be improved a bit.
> 
> For one, I think the title is misleading. (the "API" part). This document does
>  not present an API; this will be done in a future document. Just skip this 
> from the title and the abstract and you should be fine.

Addressed: done as suggested.


> Second, I think Section 2 needs a revision. Currently, it shows the 
> architecture diagram, but does not present a concise description of all the 
> actions etc.
> I know, there IS a description, but it merely reads as "anecdotal" rather than
>  being concise and complete. I just pledge for a better presentation that 
> allows the reader to understand what the individual boxes are supposed to do. 
> Currently, I am missing the overview of this.

NOT addressed, yet.
 

> Minor things:
> title page: get my affiliation right ;-)

Addressed.

> 2.1.2, sentence before the bullets "GridCPR will require..."
> should this be "jab management" rather than "grid authentication"?

Addressed.

> 2.3.3, second (black) bullet: "terminated events" should be "terminated jobs"?
> ??

Addressed.

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